The Mystique Golden Flower ...



In the solitary ambiance of a park,
On a hot summer evening
Sitting in the vicinity of
a gigantic tree. . .
My eyes fell on this beautiful creation, 
lying amidst the lush green grass... 
~Secluded, tranquil, aged and 
feeling inferior. . .
I picked this little beauty up
 from the ground 
and admired it's Beauty until I sat there...
. .
Awestruck and Mesmerized,
I wished to keep it with me. . .
Until... A voice came from within.
. .
Let go!... Let go!. . .
This is what this 
Mystique dead flower taught me... . .
How letting go of something you love
can sometimes be satisfying and
 pleasing to the soul ,
while you keep it alive
in your memory forever!!...
-Rashi


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  1. Very well written... ��❣

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  2. Thankyou for writing it down 'what most of us feel, but fail to express.'

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    1. Thank you for taking out the time to read and to appreciate it...
      Means a lot :)

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  3. Dear Rashi Beta , Excellent, a very Natural , Touching & Superbly Artistic Creative Blog.Hats off to you Beta. Please keep it up. May God Bless You .Love You BETA .PAPA.

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  4. Beautiful Written. You keep mesmerizing me with your words.

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  5. Excellent!!! You have expressed your love and feelings towards nature very nicely... Keep it up ... We are proud of you... Mumma .

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  6. Thank you Mumma ❤️๐Ÿ˜˜

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  7. A unique way of expressing a life lesson
    Loved it
    Keep growing in your passiin

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    1. Thank you so much Ruthu❤️๐Ÿ˜˜
      It means a lot ๐Ÿ˜‡

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  8. Excellent..Very well written.. Keep it up.. God bless

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    1. Thank you so much Jiju ...
      It means a lot coming from you ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. Superb artistic written ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  10. Simply amazing ❤️❤️ i ' m just a big fan of your writings❤️❤️❤️

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    1. Aww... Thank you so much Namrata...
      You are just so sweet๐Ÿ˜˜❤️

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  11. Thoughtful ๐Ÿ™Œ๐ŸŒบ

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  12. I always like your work....and this one is beautiful and deep๐ŸŒผ

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    1. Thank you so much Shivani for all the love ❤️๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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  13. Lovely poem rashi!Keep growing ๐Ÿ˜˜

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    1. Aww... Thank you so much Chhavi ๐Ÿ˜˜❤️

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  14. Beautifully written leaving a great impact.God bless you Rashi.

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  15. Beautifully written ❤️❤️

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  16. Hey Rashi ! It's always damn pleasant to go through your work .keep going .

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  17. So beautifully expressed! Fine piece of work!��❤

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