A bright,chirpy morning has risen
Soft wind's blowing,
And my senses now,
highly awaken...
The sluggish slumber,
my all weather friend for
a day like today has set me free...
I am now in a trance of my
unforgettable past...
It's like an enchanted spell,
I stand bewitched...
Helpless as I am forgetful of the counter-spell...
The memories calmly tiptoe
and carefully knock at the garden
of my soul...
Bubbles afloat my tummy,
reach out to the lips,
as I exhale a deep breath...
The rush of a series of flashbacks,
settles down for a moment and
rise again like a tsunamic wave...
I am buried, with silt atop and
could barely breathe...
In those moments of horror,
I lay frozen...
As I seized to wrestle,
with my circumstances,
I soon felt at peace within...
I realized how fortunate
I have been in my life, to have pure
gems in the form of humans,
always by my side...
Those who have crossed boundaries
and gone out of their way for me,
donning smiles, bright as the sea pearls,
expecting nothing but to see me smile...
It is for them my lord,
that I wish to shine,
when the Sun overboard's covered
with raven cloud...
-Rashi

Wow superb!❤ππ
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Vatsu <3 :)
DeleteSuch beautiful combination of words ❣️
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for finding the time to read and for the encouragement! :D
DeleteBeautifully written and just explains the thunderstorms that our mind faces all of a sudden and we find the unconditional love of our friends surrounding us,it gives us strength to do away with those thunderstorms.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much mJ for such kind words and it is truly our closest friends and our family that helps us pass such thunderous nights! ...
DeleteThank you for the encouragement! :D
Very well penned πΊπΊ
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :D
DeleteWonderful. Keep it Up.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :D
DeleteBeautiful Write-up ππ
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Divyansh :)
DeleteWay to go girl! Sublime effort.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot man, it means a lot! :D
DeleteOhhhh my god
ReplyDeleteThis is soo beautiful and Raw
I m a big fan of ur writing ππ
Keep on posting more π❤️❤️
I am your big fan for always having motivated me to write more often!
DeleteWithout I probably would have been lazing around...
So thank you! :* :D
Calming and soulful ☘♥️
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shivani :D :*
DeleteWell done my dear....such a beautiful poetry with beautiful selection of words...ππππ❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) <3
DeleteCareful use of words in poem.
ReplyDeleteThe poem explains the beauties of life amongst storm we face, we often forget -our loved ones. Thanks for reminding how blessed we are ��
Thank you Ruthu :*
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ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Riyaz! :D
DeleteSo surreal so beautiful! π
ReplyDeleteI wish you keep writing so remarkably. ❤️
Thank you so much Nimmi <3 :*
DeleteGreat work rashi ❤
ReplyDeleteSuperb dear
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rahul :)
DeleteIt's beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank you Jonu !... :*
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ReplyDeleteThank you bhai! :)
DeleteWonderful poem yet again! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYour welcome Gaurav!... Thanks for finding the time to read... :D
DeleteDear Rashi Beta,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is a realistic, truthful and mesmeric description of the realities of life and what as you yourself and your loved ones has to go through, and how important it is to balance it out and do justice first unto yourself and also to the ones who love you and stand for you, to enable you attain and righteously retain some level. I would reiterate that, it should be a fine and even balance, so that, it's fair , just, respectful and a win win to all. May God Bless you my Child.
Thank you popa!! <3
DeleteWow , it's so beautiful ❤ and mesmerizing , write more and more π
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ashutosh! Will do :)
DeleteWoww
ReplyDeleteI am very fond of your writing skills. A writer need this power not only to experience but also to express whichever is not spoken.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Di...
DeleteIt means a lot!!♥️
Perfectly chosen words and what a poetic rhythm. Great job Rashi
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ππ€
DeleteVery finely pennedπ.....I love your work Rashi DiπΌ.....Keep up the good spirits, always!π
ReplyDeleteAww...thanks a lot π€π
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